From 6c9a1a1004f224e771139aec6fd2058aa6bdccbd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Main <smain@google.com>
Date: Mon, 19 Nov 2012 11:58:59 -0800
Subject: docs: update dreamservice description

Change-Id: I7e7295a3d67ca1760ba52b3958bf91540692e542
---
 core/java/android/service/dreams/DreamService.java | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

(limited to 'core/java/android/service')

diff --git a/core/java/android/service/dreams/DreamService.java b/core/java/android/service/dreams/DreamService.java
index 6c9290b..f6b6c89 100644
--- a/core/java/android/service/dreams/DreamService.java
+++ b/core/java/android/service/dreams/DreamService.java
@@ -44,13 +44,13 @@ import android.view.accessibility.AccessibilityEvent;
 import com.android.internal.policy.PolicyManager;
 
 /**
- * Extend this class to implement a custom Dream (displayed to the user as a "Sleep Mode").
+ * Extend this class to implement a custom dream (available to the user as a "Daydream").
  *
  * <p>Dreams are interactive screensavers launched when a charging device is idle, or docked in a
  * desk dock. Dreams provide another modality for apps to express themselves, tailored for
  * an exhibition/lean-back experience.</p>
  *
- * <p>The Dream lifecycle is as follows:</p>
+ * <p>The {@code DreamService} lifecycle is as follows:</p>
  * <ol>
  *   <li>{@link #onAttachedToWindow}
  *     <p>Use this for initial setup, such as calling {@link #setContentView setContentView()}.</li>
@@ -59,14 +59,15 @@ import com.android.internal.policy.PolicyManager;
  *   <li>{@link #onDreamingStopped}
  *     <p>Use this to stop the things you started in {@link #onDreamingStarted}.</li>
  *   <li>{@link #onDetachedFromWindow}
- *     <p>Use this to dismantle resources your dream set up. For example, detach from handlers
- *        and listeners.</li>
+ *     <p>Use this to dismantle resources (for example, detach from handlers
+ *        and listeners).</li>
  * </ol>
  *
  * <p>In addition, onCreate and onDestroy (from the Service interface) will also be called, but
  * initialization and teardown should be done by overriding the hooks above.</p>
  *
- * <p>To be available to the system, Dreams should be declared in the manifest as follows:</p>
+ * <p>To be available to the system, your {@code DreamService} should be declared in the
+ * manifest as follows:</p>
  * <pre>
  * &lt;service
  *     android:name=".MyDream"
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