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page.title=Writing Style
@jd:body
<p>When choosing words for your app:</p>
<ol>
<li>
<p><strong>Keep it brief.</strong> Be concise, simple and precise. Start with a 30 character limit (including
spaces), and don't use more unless absolutely necessary.</p>
</li>
<li>
<p><strong>Keep it simple.</strong> Pretend you're speaking to someone who's smart and competent, but doesn't
know technical jargon and may not speak English very well. Use short words, active verbs, and
common nouns.</p>
</li>
<li>
<p><strong>Be friendly.</strong> Use contractions. Talk directly to the reader using second person ("you"). If
your text doesn't read the way you'd say it in casual conversation, it's probably not the way
you should write it. Don't be abrupt or annoying and make the user feel safe, happy and
energized.</p>
</li>
<li>
<p><strong>Put the most important thing first.</strong> The first two words (around 11 characters, including
spaces) should include at least a taste of the most important information in the string. If they
don't, start over.</p>
</li>
<li>
<p><strong>Describe only what's necessary, and no more.</strong> Don't try to explain subtle differences. They
will be lost on most users.</p>
</li>
<li>
<p><strong>Avoid repetition.</strong> If a significant term gets repeated within a screen or block of text, find
a way to use it just once.</p>
</li>
</ol>
<h2 id="examples">Examples</h2>
<ol><li class="value-1"><strong>Keep it brief.</strong> From the setup wizard:</ol>
<div class="layout-content-row">
<div class="layout-content-col span-6 layout-with-list-item-margins">
<div class="do-dont-label bad">Too formal</div>
<table class="ui-table good"><tbody><tr><td>
Consult the documentation that came with your phone for further instructions.
</td></tr></tbody></table>
</div>
<div class="layout-content-col span-6">
<div class="do-dont-label good">Better</div>
<table class="ui-table good"><tbody><tr><td>
Read the instructions that came with your phone.
</td></tr></tbody></table>
</div>
</div>
<div class="vspace size-1"> </div>
<ol><li class="value-2"><strong>Keep it simple.</strong> From the Location settings screen:</ol>
<div class="layout-content-row">
<div class="layout-content-col span-6 layout-with-list-item-margins">
<div class="do-dont-label bad">Confusing</div>
<table class="ui-table bad">
<thead>
<tr>
<th>
Use GPS satellites
</th>
</tr>
</thead>
<tbody>
<tr>
<td>
When locating, accurate to street level.
</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
</table>
</div>
<div class="layout-content-col span-6">
<div class="do-dont-label good">Better</div>
<table class="ui-table good">
<thead>
<tr>
<th>
GPS
</th>
</tr>
</thead>
<tbody>
<tr>
<td>
Let apps use satellites to pinpoint your location.
</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
</table>
</div>
</div>
<div class="vspace size-1"> </div>
<ol><li class="value-3"><strong>Be friendly.</strong> Dialog that appears when an application
crashes:</ol>
<div class="layout-content-row">
<div class="layout-content-col span-6 layout-with-list-item-margins">
<div class="do-dont-label bad">Confusing and annoying—"Sorry" just rubs salt in the
wound.</div>
<table class="ui-table bad">
<thead>
<tr>
<th colspan="3">
Sorry!
</th>
</tr>
</thead>
<tbody>
<tr>
<td colspan="3">
Activity MyAppActivity (in application MyApp)
is not responding.
</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
<tfoot>
<tr>
<td width="33%">Force close</td>
<td width="33%">Wait</td>
<td width="33%">Report</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
</table>
</div>
<div class="layout-content-col span-6">
<div class="do-dont-label good">Shorter, more direct, no faux-apologetic title:<br><br></div>
<table class="ui-table good">
<thead>
<tr>
<th colspan="3">
MyApp isn't responding.
</th>
</tr>
</thead>
<tbody>
<tr>
<td colspan="3">
Do you want to close it?
</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
<tfoot>
<tr>
<td width="33%">Wait</td>
<td width="33%">Report</td>
<td width="33%">Close</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
</table>
</div>
</div>
<div class="vspace size-1"> </div>
<ol><li class="value-4"><strong>Put the most important thing first.</strong></ol>
<div class="layout-content-row">
<div class="layout-content-col span-6 layout-with-list-item-margins">
<div class="do-dont-label bad">Top news last</div>
<table class="ui-table bad"><tbody><tr><td>
77 other people +1'd this, including Larry Page.
</td></tr></tbody></table>
</div>
<div class="layout-content-col span-6">
<div class="do-dont-label good">Top news first</div>
<table class="ui-table good"><tbody><tr><td>
Larry Page and 77 others +1'd this.
</td></tr></tbody></table>
</div>
</div>
<div class="layout-content-row">
<div class="layout-content-col span-6 layout-with-list-item-margins">
<div class="do-dont-label bad">Task last</div>
<table class="ui-table bad"><tbody><tr><td>
Touch Next to complete setup using a Wi-Fi connection.
</td></tr></tbody></table>
</div>
<div class="layout-content-col span-6">
<div class="do-dont-label good">Task first</div>
<table class="ui-table good"><tbody><tr><td>
To finish setup using Wi-Fi, touch Next.
</td></tr></tbody></table>
</div>
</div>
<div class="vspace size-1"> </div>
<ol><li class="value-5"><strong>Describe only what's necessary, and no more.</strong></ol>
<div class="layout-content-row">
<div class="layout-content-col span-6 layout-with-list-item-margins">
<div class="do-dont-label bad">From a Setup Wizard screen</div>
<table class="ui-table bad">
<thead>
<tr>
<th>
Signing in...
</th>
</tr>
</thead>
<tbody>
<tr>
<td>
Your phone needs to communicate with<br>
Google servers to sign in to your account.<br>
This may take up to five minutes.
</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
</table>
</div>
<div class="layout-content-col span-6">
<div class="do-dont-label good">From a Setup Wizard screen</div>
<table class="ui-table good">
<thead>
<tr>
<th>
Signing in...
</th>
</tr>
</thead>
<tbody>
<tr>
<td>
Your phone is contacting Google.<br>
This can take up to 5 minutes.
</td>
</tr>
</tbody>
</table>
</div>
</div>
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